Holy Organimania

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Librated dilapidation (Zone BBS Addict) on Saturday, 09-May-2009 13:23:45

Checkbook lighter. Romaine lettuce, organic milk, brown eggs, multigrain bread, Squats burns. Push ups, sit ups, to accentuate appearance. Body is a temple. Avoid all preservatives. Ripped. Fat free salad dressing, turkey burger, fat free communion wafers, diet water, junk food equals hell bound people. Zucchini grilled in olive oil. Fad. Hiking, rock climbing, punching bag, treadmill, addicted to endorphins. Baked chicken, swimming, running. Compete. Pain is beauty. Flat tummy, thin eye brows, white straight teeth, smooth legs, pedicure toenails, manicured finger nails. Never color insatiable long straight blond hair. Hurdler, long jump, long distance sprinter. Scripted conversations. Speak the lines act as if life is a play. Practice laughing to insure the loudest adorable sound. Diamond studded princess. Wedding to the most lusted after husband. A lifeless beauty frail spirit of putrid tissue paper. A mummified disconnected youth. A recyclable housewife, alpha supporter to all charities, Giving life to broken children. Social queen, trend setter. Horseback rider, figure skater, fashion genius, two steps ahead. Ballet dancer, weaver of words, hooking stranded braids knotted ecstasy. Procrastinated vinegar intricate arguments sensible solutions casting every stone. Lost. Second string. Annunciate, articulate, perform, purge forward, future, sophisticated recyclable tampons, fish oil vitamins, write down each calorie, scale.
Direct all of the inside jokes in your fan club to the unrestrained easy going woman who is your antithesis. Correct her grammar, add to her second class vocabulary when your audience turns away. Attack her eating habits, hair style, all you have to do to maintain your god given social place. After the most impoverished couple invites your family to their rent controlled apartment insist on only white fish, multigrain rice sprinkled in sea salt. They need you so you request the most high. Out sing the next best singer. Stay one step behind the best runner and trip them up at the 100 meter straight away. Befriend disabled members of the congregation before the rest you will look empathetic your spirit crushed for them when they dance. Pray openly for god to free them of this bondage. Invade all conversations. Disapprove of any movie star or music artist. Say you found something cheaper someplace else. One up if the person has a attention worthy story. If it didn’t happen to you it happen to a family member or friend. Always submit to each sharpened hidden social rule. Oppression. You spend so much more time to live. Your lungs hurt to take in the harsh air. You feel the actual movement of the cosmos. God can feel only you are the center of significant time. Pain is only a tool to manipulate. Dreams are for those who will not act. Tears fall from the eyes of those who are not worthy of love. Only those loved can smile. Joy is for the woman who can bring fourth life. Drugs are a way of population control. Abortion serves some well. You are the perfect Christian. Pure, spiteful, judging all those who sin for your purity. Life is eternal. No sorrow shall darken your mind. Divide, dismember, slice. Who will know? Personality and social grace are most sincere. Give venom to those that resist you. Your purpose. Beaded deceit, nothing forgotten creatively constructed into flawless pastel glory.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Saturday, 09-May-2009 22:35:50

This is amazing! The piece surpasses thought-provoking. My favorite words of this poem are "long distance sprinter." The way I perceive this is that people try so hard to cover up what they really are to fit in with everyone else, or to make themselves "normal" or presentable so that others will not shun, dislike, or undermine them.
This poem is a true masterpiece.

Post 3 by Librated dilapidation (Zone BBS Addict) on Sunday, 24-May-2009 10:54:47

This is just what I am going for. Thanks for the feed back.

Post 4 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Thursday, 04-Jun-2009 13:20:05

Its amazing! Very good immagary, wording, everything's awesome!

Post 5 by Librated dilapidation (Zone BBS Addict) on Tuesday, 09-Jun-2009 21:57:10

thank you

Post 6 by Godzilla-On-Toast (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Thursday, 11-Jun-2009 2:41:58

This is great, and I usually am not one who cares much for poetry, save for silly humorous stuff. Unfortunately it does not help me have a better feeling about aspects of human beings, though. Makes me feel rather disgusted for most people.

Post 7 by Librated dilapidation (Zone BBS Addict) on Wednesday, 17-Jun-2009 19:58:33

Coming from you that is an awesome comment. I love reading your posts.

Post 8 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Friday, 19-Jun-2009 4:20:47

Isn't this a bit socialistic? that's how marxists views the rich, you know?